The night of the puppy's.

The night of the puppies
One  peaceful night, at 1 o'clock my dad woke me up, I got such a fright!! I almost jumped out of my socks. My dad whispered” puppies! my mouth dropped, my heart started pounding. I sprinted to the lounge, but my mum told me to be quiet because a puppy had been born.

One hour later, we heard a squeak . Another three puppies I had been born. later that morning my sister Shannon ran to my bed and yelled ”We have 7 more puppies’’!

As I got out of bed ,it was like my feet had been electrocuted because I was as energetic as a cheetah  .The puppies were as cute as  a baby hedgehog. They were as big as two fists put together!!!!!

That day was one of the best days of My life. I hope the puppy's have great  owners and  amazing homes. I look forward to seeing them in the future. {I wish we were allowed to keep them }


Mr k 
He helped me with my spelling and 
I think I have improved a lot  because he gave me another
way of fixing my mistakes.




Mr s
He helped me with my punctuation and gave me some feedback on my work and he told me about my gapes on this piece of writing