The night of the puppy's.

The night of the puppies
One  peaceful night, at 1 o'clock my dad woke me up, I got such a fright!! I almost jumped out of my socks. My dad whispered” puppies! my mouth dropped, my heart started pounding. I sprinted to the lounge, but my mum told me to be quiet because a puppy had been born.

One hour later, we heard a squeak . Another three puppies I had been born. later that morning my sister Shannon ran to my bed and yelled ”We have 7 more puppies’’!

As I got out of bed ,it was like my feet had been electrocuted because I was as energetic as a cheetah  .The puppies were as cute as  a baby hedgehog. They were as big as two fists put together!!!!!

That day was one of the best days of My life. I hope the puppy's have great  owners and  amazing homes. I look forward to seeing them in the future. {I wish we were allowed to keep them }


Mr k 
He helped me with my spelling and 
I think I have improved a lot  because he gave me another
way of fixing my mistakes.




Mr s
He helped me with my punctuation and gave me some feedback on my work and he told me about my gapes on this piece of writing     

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My school is called Makauri. My home teacher is Mr K. I am in a hub with 3 teachers - Mr K ,Mr S and Miss Johnston. I am South African and German. My passion is singing and dancing. I love Kapa Haka. I live with my mum, dad and sister.

I am good at dancing and I love writing at school. My favourite subjects at school are Writing and Kapa Haka. My favourite food is passion fruit and feijoa.

The person who inspires me is my dad because he gives us lots of things to try and he never gives up.

The other person who inspires me is Austin Rice. He is a lyrical and contemporary dancer from Gisborne. My goal for this year is to get a leadership award. This year I hope to be at least level 3 moving into level 4. I hope all of my goals in writing has been achieved by the end of the year.

I hope you like it.